What I hate

[Goat Whisperer]

I let you in, I let you through,
We connected then, you felt it too.
It wasn’t long but it was there,
Now it’s just a memory I can hardly bare.

I trusted you inside and out,
I never felt a single doubt.
You let me down, you didn’t care,
You didn’t even clear the air.

You loved me one day and hated the next.
Why was I always second best?
You hid me from friends, and to really sting,
You pretended that I didn’t mean something.

I hate the way you acted, the way you treated me,
I hate that I let this happen, I hate that you still don’t see.
I hate that I let this hurt; but most of all,
I hate the way I don't hate you at all.

I hate that I still smile when I think of all we did and said,
I hate that I would cry and cry if you ever turned up dead.
I hate that deep down inside I know it might still be true,
That I hate the thought of never ever being with you.

....I dunno if I should send it to him.....

 

[Zorak]

I wouldn't. Might get a reputation as a mentalist.

 

[itsmeJonB]

no you shouldnt

publish it, post it or keep it anonymous, but dont send it to him

 

[Alien Allen]

Sorry you got burned but consider it one of lifes lessons and move on

Dex is right. Post it to vent your frustration and anger. It helps to get it out.

But sending it to the guy is not going to have an impact on him.

 

[Mystic]

ya don't send it to him...

thats lovely btw. I'm glad you shared it with us.

 

[RedRyder]

ya don't send it to him...

thats lovely btw. I'm glad you shared it with us.

:homo:

 

[dazner]

damn that was good...

 

[flopstock]

No. Find someone that makes you write happy thoughts instead.

 

[Dana]

i like it.I miss writing poetry. I've got nothing to inspire me lately.

 

[TheTinGirl]

I enjoyed this- and I know it's been a bit since the original post, but I hope you didn't send it to him.
That just shows that you're still thinking of him...kind of counter productive.
Hope things are going well for you, I really enjoyed this piece.