The Beast

[Babygirl7182]

The edges of my soul darken,
As the shadows of fear creep in.
Without understanding on my side,
This fear will not leave.
This world is full of hate and anger,
As I look across the sea of faces,
It seems there is no end in sight.
The lack of knowledge or want of it,
Causes the hypocrites of this world'
To hate what they can not understand.
If only they would open their eyes,
They might see the pain they have caused.
The cruelty flows from their forked tounges,
And clawed twisted hands.
These demons underestimate the value of human life.
The young and misunderstood youth of today unite,
To dispel the hatred and anger of the hypocrites.
Those who hate what they can not change,
Will be shown how their forked tounges have broken others.
The silver spoons will be ripped from their mouths,
To make them equals,
To show them who we are.
We will stand together,
To beat the beast.

 

[Reaver]

too emo

this should be a dashboard confessionsal song

 

[Babygirl7182]

Reaver-
Poetry is supposed to be emotional, that is the basic point of poetry to put feeling and emotins into words. I am sorry that you did not like it, but no poem is going to touch everyone

 

[impulse11779]

this is a great poem and yes by the way poetry is emotional

 

[Sa\/en]

Absolutely amazing. Great work.

 

[SilentEyz]

too emo

this should be a dashboard confessionsal song

Please in the Future if you do not like a poem, please refrain from making a negative comment on it.....

Not everyone will like another's poetry, But it takes a lot of courage to put your poems out for anyone to read.

Poetry is about encouragment, negative responses discourage people from Sharing their hearts. ( which is what poetry is about)

 

[elluko]

Creepy...... I like it!
Great poem, and keep up the good work.

 

[Xaoc]

I think tihit is great poem. I like it. I am not a professional in poetry but i feel autors emotions. As for me thit woul be the great start of Holywood movie from Lord of the Rings cathegory.