Spur

[SouthOfHeaven]

Life.. what is life?
Life is a circle
Circle of oppertunities..
Circle of mistakes..
Shit happens right?
Then what?
Move on?
...How?
What can be done to fix the wrongs?
Anything...?
Do you hurt the ones that hurt you?
Or do you smile in the face of hate?
God teaches you to love thy neighbor
...Why? What's the point?
The past cannot be changed
But it made you who you are..
Do you really want to be someone else?
Are you that unhappy?
Learn from your past..
Embrace it..
Come to terms with it..
SHOUT IT OUT!
Cry
Realize what it is you have now
Who it is that you have become
How much you have going for your life
Fuck the dumb shit
Live your life
Be happy
Embrace your life
Never forget who you are
And how you got there
Good or bad
It's you
Break that fuckin circle
It hasn't got to be that way
Break it
Break it
And only then will you be at peace


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I know this isn't that good.. it really was written on a spur.. my mom and my aunt got in to some really emotional stuff ( after they had about o i dont know 2 bottles of jager1 bottle of sky and a bottlle of captin) and it just seemed like they hated where they are today because of stuff that had happened to them in the past.. soi wrote this for them..

 

[juggler]

I know this isn't that good.. it really was written on a spur..

Don't put yourself down. Excellent stuff. Keep at it!

 

[Suzie]

Thats good work... its to the point, I like it.

 

[NuckingFuts]

Really that was good stuff. :clap:clap:clap

 

[Kat]

that was really good soh. A good reminder too thank you for sharing

 

[dazner]

this was good it was almost like I could hear your voicing reading it with the passion and tone you would give..(even though I've never heard your voice) nice piece this is something I would do live at a club questions help alot to catch the audience especially if said right...

damn Brandii nice work.:thumbup