Something ( Ok trying to get back at the poems comment it )

[darklove]

Crying tears of blood
seeking more
more in life something i can do
something useful someone
someone like you
my heart is hurting
my lies are dying
my exsitents is fading
Lies only leads to tears
my tears turn to fears
the same thing over and over again
let it go let me go
im tired im done
Crying tears of water is done
bring on the blood thats all thats left
the cold cold blood
and you hear a thud
the thud of my body hitting the floor
as im gone i have faded
and all thats left is the blood on the floor
that came from my tears

By Brittany


Ok Hows this? depressing and sad i know but those are the only good poems i right sad i know i dont mean it well some of it but really tell me leave me a comment!!​

 

[lemon]

wow - thats good.

 

[darklove]

wow - thats good.

Thank you i really just sat here and thought i said the mad feelings i have had and the sad ones i guess !! so thanks

 

[Kat]

it is very good dark...and i have been there before...it reminds me of how i felt back then