something i just wrote

[Dana]

its been years since ive written any poetry but this seems to flow from my mind... it's pretty short

u can see her soul thru her eyes
deep like the blue waters of the ocean they glow
her presence engulfs you
your being pulled by the undertow
you sink deep into her eyes
you see every thought
shes an angel in disguise
on clouds she walks
she takes your hand
and lifts you high
like a bird you soar
thru the vast open skies
shes weighs heavy on your mind
never will you erase
what u wouldnt give for her soul to taste

 

[Dana]

bumpin... cuz i don't like bein slept on

 

[jassilem]

bumpin... cuz i don't like bein slept on

LOL..

I read it last night and it's good

 

[chasingcars]

Wow. I love this poem. This would be so good as a song. Keep up the great poems

 

[c91329]

Wow. I love this poem. This would be so good as a song. Keep up the great poems

I agree this is a good short poem with lots of meaning. Keep up the good work.:willy_nilly: