Some writing of mine

Users who are viewing this thread

MrAWatts

Active Member
Messages
2,437
Reaction score
0
Tokenz
0.02z
Re: RE: Some writing of mine

tonytroll said:
Oh..you're one of those.. the clingy type who has to be with some one or life is empty..

dude you are young why even worry about a relationship?
I mean come on man you just turned 18.. you just got out of a two year relationship??? ha..How many divorces are you looking forward to?
And what the hell? you dreading the whole dating thing?
You need to get real kid. you have no idea what the dating thing is about.
All your dealt with so far is puppy love.


Or you could stop stereotyping every young person to be a carbon copy of one another? I've been through quite a bit in my life, and I have had quite a bit of loss. I know what it is to love someone, and to lose them. Family, friends, and people in general. You would not believe that of course, since being 18 means I know nothing. You can read my blog called "biggest mistake" on my myspace, and it details some of the things that have happened to me in the past. Because I know when you hear an 18 year old saying "I have been through alot in life" your narrowmindedness is instantly going to assume I am reffering to some high school drama breakup, and claiming that to be what is making my life so hard.

So perhaps you should just learn to appreciate poetry as a hearfelt expression of what someone is feeling, rather than take it as an invitation for you to try and tell me I don't know what I'm feeling. Is that beyond your capabilities?
 
  • 24
    Replies
  • 1K
    Views
  • 0
    Participant count
    Participants list

tonytroll

Member
Messages
447
Reaction score
0
Tokenz
0.00z
Ok..What ever you say. Hey why don't you take this save it then re read it in about 5 years.

The funny thing about all us narrowminded folk. We were where you are, and thought the exact same thing. The thing is you're experiencing what I have already experienced.
plus I never said any thing negative about your writing. it has potential. it does border on teenage angst but not so bad as to make me sick.

good luck with your chemistry set.
 

Tazzy

Active Member
Messages
4,721
Reaction score
0
Tokenz
0.02z
Hey Watts coming from another old person ....... I think that is very beautiful and insightful ....... all i can say is i hope you learn from it ....... though i am old i dont judge and i appreciate what you have to say Old and YOUNG alike........ :dunno :dunno :D :D
 

MrAWatts

Active Member
Messages
2,437
Reaction score
0
Tokenz
0.02z
Why thank you Tazzy. It has been forever! Back when I posted like all the time, you had gone away. Glad your back :banana :banana :booze
 
79,554Threads
2,190,614Messages
5,004Members
Back
Top