Silk-clock

[Sam]

Half blinded, halfblooded
Half bald, half broke
Nylon stripping silhouettes
Growing hair on face

A reality will sermon
The truth of continual
Time wont stop
Time flies

Wild and ugly salvage
Tick tock, ring ring
That’s what the clock sings
Driving you into a maze

The swift stance of the clock
Resembles the smoothness
Of the silk cloth you wear often
My hand slips down as days passes by

 

[random guy 517]

i liked it. to me, it had a sort of...almost dreamy kind of feel to it. the personifications added character to it.
nice job

 

[Sam]

Thanks Random .. appreciate ur feedback