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darklove

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memories dying
My heart is crying
Crying to let go
just to let everyone know
IM done i will not love
i will not let anyone try to love me
I can not stand the pain anymore
so as i say my heart is now dying
dying away i just want to let it out
scream the storys untold
let everyone know
that i will not hold
hold onto love the thing that hurts
the thing that has made me give up all my ways
i have become a shadow in the corner
silently watching
my heart fading screaming let go
I really just dont wanna know anymore
im done with this world
no more memories to be shared
and all thats left of me is my shatterd heart
in the chair where i used to be!


Sometimes i just wanna let it out and i think this poem kinda help so some one plz look at it and give me some comments on it!
 
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SilentEyz

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Its very strong emotions in your words Dark, can feel the pain in the writing, very well done.. Thank you
 

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its as silent said filled with such strong yet sad emotions...It speaks to my heart right now in so many ways...thank you so much for sharing this dark...its beautiful
 
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