Shannon's Cannon

[elluko]

Heres an attempt at a poem.
Ummm... Here goes:

There once was a kid named Shannon
In her pocket she carried a miniature cannon
She imagined that she was on a gigantic battleground
and her enemy was the teacher when shes turned around.

I havent made a thread in the poem section for a long time. I dont mind critisism.

 

[SilentEyz]

lol.. That is cute Luke.. Keep it up.. you never know when your true talent will sneak out unplanned

 

[darklove]

Cute lol nice

Bre

 

[Sam]

El ... fantastic write-up now thats a real " EL - Branded " poem ... no criticism .. only applauds ... well done

 

[elluko]

Thanks guys!
I was expecting to get a bunch of posts saying, "Ummmmm... great job, Luke..."

 

[Sam]

El ... we want see more of such poems from your " EL-BAGGO " ... so cheer up and come up with some thing like " Shannon's Cannon " stuff... good job

 

[sharpies]

You know what Luke, I'm not a big fan of "poetry" but I liked it.

Note: the reason I put poetry in quote marks is because I am a big music fan & that is where the true poet of the 20th Century resides - in song.

Allan

 

[Sam]

Every POEM can be a song but not every SONG can be a POEM ....

 

[sharpies]

No arguement from me on that one - just noting that I find standard poetry can be droll & that I think that most of the great poems of the last 75 years were set to music.

Allan

 

[elluko]

No arguement from me on that one - just noting that I find standard poetry can be droll & that I think that most of the great poems of the last 75 years were set to music.

Allan

Exactly, why read to Shakespeare when you can bob your head to him?