Very cool Blue!!!!!! I really like the way you write. :rock
All of my songs start out as very lengthy poety before I condense them down. Here's one for you. I chose this one because it has the line in my sig, LOL. Now you can hear the rest.
*verse*
I hit my head when I fell back on reality,
my mug ripped open and my mind spilled around.
Amsesia set in and I forgot about gravity,
the hard stuff helped me keep my feet on the ground.
Your always asking me where's my rationality,
I lost it long ago back when I drowned.
All there is to know about my anxieties,
don't cage me up or I might freak out.
*verse*
My brain is chained to a steak in the back yard,
it's getting shorter every time I try to think.
Young ideas still hold a place in my heart,
now dead and rotted but they still don't stink
Why do the pains of humanity eat at me,
they see the same things and never even blink.
Every time I'm about to give up,
the bubble in my chest just won't let me sink.
*chorus*
Then the day came,
And the pain came.
It's leading us to blame,
we've got to stop this game
It's putting us to shame,
we've got to stop it's game
It's driving me insane,
we've got to stop this game
It's leading us to pain,
we've got to stop it's game
Here is the actual song:
http://home.ripway.com/2004-5/117157/hit my head.wma