Need help!

[MMMMatilde]

I am doing this for my Mum's work. It's going on a pamphlet that's going all around Australia and it has to look like something that the goverment WOULDN'T do. I have two pictures and I need to know what you would improve etc.. I'm pretty happy with them considering I only have Paint

the black and white one I want to add something to the top right corner I just don't know what.

 

[MMMMatilde]

bump.

need me feedback please.

 

[JanieDough]

i don't like the way the hand looks in the white one - the right arm looks like its half an arm

but i do prefer that one anyways - they both look pretty cool!

they don't have a logo or anything you can put in the corner?

 

[Thornless]

2nd one is easier to read.

 

[alice in chains]

i also like the second one more

 

[MMMMatilde]

i don't like the way the hand looks in the white one - the right arm looks like its half an arm

but i do prefer that one anyways - they both look pretty cool!

they don't have a logo or anything you can put in the corner?

I wish they did have a logo it would make my life a lot easier to work on it.. but I'm designing everything. They didn't have a colour theme, they don't have a logo... they didn't even have an idea. I had to do EVERYTHING lol.. all I got told was it couldn't look like something the government would do and that it had to say young carers on it.. that was it!

bloody pains in the bum, that is what I thinks.

 

[MMMMatilde]

I moved the writing in the black and white one, I just want them to have two good ones to choose from that's all.

 

[MMMMatilde]

Is this easier to read? I did a few small things to it.

 

[JanieDough]

is it pixelated on your version?

 

[MMMMatilde]

On offtopicz yes, not on my screen though.

 

[JanieDough]

On offtopicz yes, not on my screen though.

ok. what does the organization do?

i think it looks good, you sure you need something in the right hand corner?

 

[MMMMatilde]

ok. what does the organization do?

i think it looks good, you sure you need something in the right hand corner?

that's the problem, I'm not sure if it needs something there.. I just feel it's missing something :i


I found an explination that shows what a young carer is, apart from the fact that it's older then what is stated, I believe it's actually 17..

It helps people who are a young carer with all the things that they might be lacking, it teaches them how to help, they give them extra financial support, they give them mental support.. It's just about "what a young carer is" and how they can get help etc etc. You see these sort of things in doctors surgeries and places of that nature that give out helpful things..

I'm not making much sense, I apologize.

 

[JanieDough]

that's ok - maybe I don't understand the word carer?

 

[MMMMatilde]

someone who is a carer is someone who takes care of somebody with some sort of disability of illness etc. They dedicate their time to this person who needs care and can't give it to themselves.

My Mum works for a part of the goverment called FHCSIA which is.. family, housing, comunity services and indigenous affairs.. so she is part of the section called the carers branch and she is in charge of helping other people understand what their job as a carer is.. it's all very complicated to explain.

 

[MommyOfAnAngel]

Is this easier to read? I did a few small things to it.

i like this but the hand on the left looks weird. other than that tho, it looks good

 

[JanieDough]

no i gotcha - i think it looks good then!

 

[MMMMatilde]

what about this one? :i



I'm thinking not.. but I want opinions. why does Mum have to choose me to do this?

 

[MMMMatilde]

I've found one I really like now.. kinda

what do you think??

 

[JanieDough]

if you do either of those lighten up the pictures to where they look opaque or faded so the words pop out more.

i dont like the first picture and the second one makes it seem like they only care for older people.

 

[MMMMatilde]

grrr lol I hate the truth -.- lol thank you though, heaps big help!!