Very nice, Leah.
First time I've picked up that English was not your first language. Tiny little things like "split of a second" instead of "split second". Realizing that, it just made your use of imagery that much more impressive.
In your first scene I could picture the girl walking up perfectly. You have a gift for descriptive imagery, girly.
But hell, we knew that from your posting style.
Good job, hun. Can't wait to see more from you.
First time I've picked up that English was not your first language. Tiny little things like "split of a second" instead of "split second". Realizing that, it just made your use of imagery that much more impressive.
In your first scene I could picture the girl walking up perfectly. You have a gift for descriptive imagery, girly.
But hell, we knew that from your posting style.
Good job, hun. Can't wait to see more from you.
