my first attempt at this

[AUDRAA]

As I sit here all alone
My thoughts are filled with you
Are you thinking about me too?
Time heals a confused and broken heart
Time that feels like an eternity while I sit and wait
My heart aches to feel you near me
Questions fill my head, are you the one for me?
As I sit here all alone
I wonder what youre doing
Are you thinking about me too?

 

[Boomer]

Beautiful work Pony. *hugz*

 

[mcknight]

good work pony keep it up!!!

 

[SilentSinz]

hey pony i found it tasty and delicious Good job!

 

[NightWarrior]

Very nice Pony. I wonder who your thinking about...

 

[dt3]

I'm not a poetry critic or anything, but very good! It made me want to snap my fingers in applause and drink a latte with a beret on my head!

 

[Kat]

very good audra. Great job hun *hugs*

 

[Peter Parka]

*Big hug for Audra*, very good poem, let it all out!

 

[Johnny]

Very good
Better then my frist

 

[BreakfastSurreal]

who is it about audra! i must know! good poem!

 

[hhayes]

nice poem audra

 

[AUDRAA]

thanks everyone

 

[memento_mori]

heh, guess that annoying guy that was bugging you must have read this and misunderstood.

good post, btw

 

[AUDRAA]

ha that guy isnt a member here

 

[Veronica]

Very good poem.