Life, wonder

[darklove]

Life is like water
slipping away
but its never coming back
not to day
and not tommarow
not now
not ever
So some people think they last forever
try a bullet to the head
try a slit to the wrist
try a pool of tears
then you will know what i say
when i say
life is like blood
dripping away
life is like water
slipping away





By Bre!​

 

[elluko]

wow, very effective.

 

[darklove]

Lol ty i was really depressed and tierd so i dont no why i wrote it but i did lol anyways Thanks at least you comment my poems lol Hey how come you never chat ? lol well anyways thanks

 

[Pip_of_Dodos]

Oh me really likes that! *clap*

 

[Sa\/en]

Very good

 

[Babygirl7182]

Intense, deep and insightful ty for sharing