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ok.....constructive criticism.....and before i get jumped on i've ok'd it with flip
the tower.......in essence a good picture that is lacking a little,the tower could be off to the side a bit utilising the rule of thirds,its not quite straight so stepping back and allowing more room for straightening might have been a good idea.......and always try to get the whole thing in as you cut the top bit offtower_on_the_hill.png
Tower on the Hill by *FlippinPhil on deviantART

daffodil......very effective....where i know what you were trying to achieve with the tree the picture doesn't need it.......the vibrancy of the daffs makes this onedaffodil_field.png
Daffodils Forever by *FlippinPhil on deviantART

peacock.....nothing much wrong here,you've caught the colours nicely...but....the point of a peacock is his tail feathers.....with a subject like this always try to get the whole thing inpeacock_curve.png
Peacock by *FlippinPhil on deviantART

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Posing Peacock by *FlippinPhil on deviantART

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Thank you. :)

Yeah, I realise the top of the flag is cut off which should have been all in. Going backwards wouldn't have straightened anything up though, it's on a hill, none of the ground was level, the tower wasn't level itself.

Not sure what you mean by "what you were trying to achieve with the tree the picture doesn't need it", wasn't trying to achieve anything with the tree lol.. it was just there, and had a nice glow to it from the daffodils. I guess I could try getting a shot without it, but wouldn't be worth the trip etc. I'm pretty happy with it the way it is.

I agree with the peacock though, I wanted a picture of him with his feathers up, but wasn't successful. I'll re-visit him though in the near future I think. :)

Thanks.
 
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