Joint effort of otz writers

[Kat]

If anyone is interested...chimera gave me an idea. would anyone be interested in a joint effort poem...everyone adds a little bit to it...a few lines...

everyone here has such a unique writing style i was curious to see what would come of it.

*I wanted to add one more note to this...another idea for it...once this one dies out...hasnt been added to for a bit...how bout someone jump in and start a new one...lets see if we can keep it going...all otz people welcome to join in not just those who usually post in here *

The only thing that pops into my head for starters is

~If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind~



*anyone interested in seeing where this goes pick it up from there...add what you want what you think sounds good in your own style...*

I could update this thread as the poem grows

 

[Chimera]

~If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind~
stop the clock as on a dime
returning all the pain I find

 

[Tim]

If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind
stop the clock as on a dime,
returning all the pain I find
I would save the best for me,
just a piece of misery.

 

[Boomer]

If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind
stop the clock as on a dime,
returning all the pain I find
I would save the best for me,
just a piece of misery.
free from whats restricting me
I unfurl my history's mysteries

 

[Specialized]

If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind
stop the clock as on a dime,
returning all the pain I find
I would save the best for me,
just a piece of misery.
free from whats restricting me
I unfurl my history's mysteries
And I find an inner soul,
but one I can not control.

 

[Kat]

*I wanted to add one more note to this...another idea for it...once this one dies out...hasnt been added to for a bit...how bout someone jump in and start a new one...lets see if we can keep it going...all otz people welcome to join in not just those who usually post in here *


so far we have for this poem...

If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind
stop the clock as on a dime,
returning all the pain I find
I would save the best for me,
just a piece of misery.
free from whats restricting me
I unfurl my history's mysteries
And I find an inner soul,
but one I can not control.

 

[Bagel]

*I wanted to add one more note to this...another idea for it...once this one dies out...hasnt been added to for a bit...how bout someone jump in and start a new one...lets see if we can keep it going...all otz people welcome to join in not just those who usually post in here *


so far we have for this poem...

If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind
stop the clock as on a dime,
returning all the pain I find
I would save the best for me,
just a piece of misery.
free from whats restricting me
I unfurl my history's mysteries
And I find an inner soul,
but one I can not control.

the firey heart of only one,
deciding whats beginning or done,

 

[Kat]

ok so I guess this ends the first one...anyone want to have a go at starting the next?


*note if you want to continue on the first no problem it was just a thought*

 

[elluko]

twas the night before christmas...
JK


Hows about

My heart bleeds for her/him,
like an open wound

 

[Kat]

My heart bleeds for her/him,
like an open wound.
Trying desperatly to heal the pain,
unravel the damage done.

 

[Boomer]

If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind
stop the clock as on a dime,
returning all the pain I find
I would save the best for me,
just a piece of misery.
free from whats restricting me
I unfurl my history's mysteries
And I find an inner soul,
but one I can not control.
My heart bleeds for her/him,
like an open wound.
Trying desperatly to heal the pain,
unravel the damage done.
Through clenched teeth
With white knuckled fists
I swallow the pain
and the hollowness that exists

 

[Chimera]

My heart bleeds for her/him,
like an open wound.
Trying desperatly to heal the pain,
unravel the damage done.
Alone in thoughts of loss I sit
Knowing one more day wont fade my torment

 

[random guy 517]

(adding to boomer)

which is what i have done all through the years
secretly trapping all my hatred and fear
forgotten it lays there-and there it remains
knowing one day i'll give in to the pain

 

[Specialized]

I'm lost now. Which to follow...

 

[SilentEyz]

I'm lost now. Which to follow...

Whichever one you choose. one or both.. wherever your words take you

 

[Boomer]

find a way to blend them if you prefer. Its totally on you.

 

[Specialized]

My heart bleeds for her/him,
like an open wound.
Trying desperatly to heal the pain,
unravel the damage done.
Alone in thoughts of loss I sit
Knowing one more day wont fade my torment
which is what i have done all through the years
secretly trapping all my hatred and fear
forgotten it lays there-and there it remains
knowing one day i'll give in to the pain
And now, when my heart bleeds it no longer stings
For I have no gone onto the better side of things.

 

[BaggedSplash]

I think of the memories of yesterday
For I will weep for them as i sit and pray

 

[Specialized]

I think of the memories of yesterday
For I will weep for them as i sit and pray
Moments now gone that are stuck in my mind,
With this prayer I ask for them to rewind.

 

[SilentEyz]

WOW.. I just have to intervine here guys and tell ya..

Yall are coming up with some amazing thoughts and words..


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