"Is It Okay?"

[kim3478]

(Sorry if it sounds mushy, but I wrote it after a break up ages ago).

I once had someone to wipe the tears
From my soft saddened eyes
Every time we said goodbye...
Nudging your beautiful body
Whenever we embraced so tightly
Or cuddled so close at night.
Just looking at your gorgeous face,
The one I cannot replace,
Is now gone, without its trace.
I made love to you every day and evening,
And felt amazed and in awe
Like nothing had felt that way ever before.
Some day I would just like, to hold your hands,
To remind me of who you really are,
And believe that you're never far...
Our connections cracked, and bled to dry;
But my fallow face, it doesn't lie
For every moment I have broken out and cried.
I remember the songs sung so sweetly
Now just miserable reminisced memories,
Nostalgic meaningless melodies.
But I cannot forget the fun and fury,
The times where there was just pure love,
Yet the present fails to prove it could withstand above.
It is you, and only you who has always been;
No other soul gleaming on my screen.
Simply, innocently, just you.
I LOVE, YOU.
I love you, more, than anything.
And sometimes that's all I can say
Without choking on the terrible saltiness of tears,
Or suffocating from my anxious fear.
Is it okay? To love you? Regardless of anything?...

*The end*
:willy_nilly:

 

[Jessica]

that's a good poem :nod: nice job

 

[Wichita]

It's pretty good kimy, you really can tell there's a difference between you writing down something with a low emotional charge and something energetic thoughtforms accompanied by a strong emotional charge. It's something of the moment you know and I thing you nailed it.

thanks for sharing it.

 

[kim3478]

Thank you so much guys I appreciate it

 

[Jessica]

no problem


Some people are just super good at poetry