Excerpts from my Journal.

[donkeypunch]

Start trouble, spread pain
Piss and venom, in your veins
Talk nasty, breathe fire
Smell rotten, you’re a liar
Sweat liquor, breathe snot
Eat garbage, spit blood
Diseased, health hazard
Scum bag, filthy bastard
Greasy face, teeth decay
Hair matted, drunk all day
Abscessed, sunken veins
Rot gut, scrambled brain
Steal money, crash cars
Rob jewellery, hock guitars
Rot in hell, it’s time you know
To your master, off you go...

 

[Lurker]

You have impressive literary skills, writing of that caliber at such a young age is amazing; you could be Harvard material with chops like that

Thank you very much sloc, I'm usaully very modest about my work, and hardly show it to my friends or aquaintences, I chose the internet to share my writings and thought it was the best place in case someone thought it was crap, fortunetly the complete opposite happened, thanks