Dead

[Boomer]

Trapped
this pain inside me hides
the real reasons im alive
part dead i find myself behind
everyone else instead
im dead

when does it end
this lovely ride
up it gos
down it slides
Heaven knows which path I walk
Its mine alone and all my fault

never sad
never happy
always in the grey
I didnt know
when I turned to go
this is my last day to stay

 

[alleycat]

pull my string

 

[Kat]

wow nboomer that was so good...i love it

 

[Boomer]

Thanks. Little sumthin I had just come up with.

 

[SilentEyz]

Damn a Little somthing With so much in those words.. I really, really like it

 

[Johnny]

Wow
That was really good I liked it

 

[Boomer]

Well thank you very much, all of you. You guys make me feel good when Im blue.

 

[Johnny]

Yeah man we are ya Homies

 

[Chimera]

Extremely well crafted, wordplay is such a wonderful toy

I very much like this piece

 

[Maritxu]

That was very good