Dark deep eyes

[Sam]

Dark deep eyes

The wrine of beauty
The glib on your face
Shines brighter
Moon on the 14th day

Earth, soil, land fertile
Trees, plants, flowers fragile
A breeze whiz into arms
Escaped from the hair, above

A paramour of patience
A cage of sorrow
A view of the haven
Asylum to sleep

Eight toys, two dolls
Folded within, gaping holes
2 dimes, 1 chain
Precious heart, valued more

 

[Obdurate]

I like this!

Nice choice of using "sorrow" instead of "sadness," as well. I like more abstract stuff.