Crying these Tears

[SilentEyz]

Crying these tears,
Wondering why
Denying the pain
buried so deep

Crying these tears
Caring no more
should I concern
or try to believe

Crying these tears
Wishing some would see
Life has no meaning
Nothing left for me

Crying these tears
Fighting to be strong
Looking at lost hope
Wondering where I went wrong.

©
SilentEyz (♥)

 

[Maritxu]

wow. well done!

 

[Muse]

I hope you dont see this as derogatory silenteyz -its meant to be constructive.

You have a REAL talent. There are forums and creative boards all over the net - few have anyone writing to your standard.

I have seen this standard before, often, and worked with creative writers, but, one question - your writing all tells a story of what your current problems and issues are - what when you find peace - can you sustain this standard and write in another mode?

If you can - and keep the same level of writing - you should be going for this professionally?! I mean it, for many the talent is lost when the pain and anger is gone, if it were ever there at all - you kind of stand out from crowds that are all over the net, trying to do just what you are doing....very well - Go girl!

 

[SilentEyz]

I hope you dont see this as derogatory silenteyz -its meant to be constructive.

You have a REAL talent. There are forums and creative boards all over the net - few have anyone writing to your standard.

I have seen this standard before, often, and worked with creative writers, but, one question - your writing all tells a story of what your current problems and issues are - what when you find peace - can you sustain this standard and write in another mode?

If you can - and keep the same level of writing - you should be going for this professionally?! I mean it, for many the talent is lost when the pain and anger is gone, if it were ever there at all - you kind of stand out from crowds that are all over the net, trying to do just what you are doing....very well - Go girl!

Thank you Muse, And I understand what you are saying and asking, When my pain is gone, I do change my writing Style, I write of other things, or often I write on the pain of those around me. When I have more time I will Post some of mine that are not based on my emotions.

 

[elluko]

Wonderbar!