contact...the landing

[skyblue]

man has made contact with an alien vessel heading towards earth....the humans are located in warwickshire,england

heres the conversation

'we've located co-ordinates for you to land,its what we call a field....its close to here'

'give us the co-ordinates,we'll set our craft to auto and just fly in'

'the co-ordinates are 30degrees by 58degrees'

'we'll be landing shortly'

'how far are you from the landing site'

'approximately 3 of your minutes'

'that a go then,happy landing'

'2 minutes out,can you see us on your radar?'

'thats a negative....are you sure you have the correct location?'

'we have the correct location.....can you see us yet?....we're ready to land'

'no we cant..we should have a visual by now.....nothing'

'we're ready to touch down.....can you see us?'

'no we cant..you must be in the wrong place'

'we've landed.....we're in a jungle of green swards and giant anthropods,where have you sent us?.....we're being attacked
by anthropods with huge pincers...help us.....we need help immediately'

'give us your current location lander'



'lander.....can you hear us?.....answer please lander'

deadly silence

 

[lusira2bisai2]

hello skyblue,a name of a soft drink brand.so will there be a continuation?Well firstly i thought like,something like mindnumbingly,cliched funny will pop up,but no.
-well if you want my opinion,sounds sci-fi,hmm
-i like how you call the aliens lander
-basically it sounds like a cliched umm,conspiarcy/terrorist/spy-ish atmosphere which is annoying for me currently other than that:quick read.suspense.

 

[porterjack]

the chances of anything coming from mars
was a million to one they said

but still they came

 

[Guyzerr]

the chances of anything coming from mars
was a million to one they said

but still they came

It wasn't a " they ". It was my ex-wife coming back to haunt me.