Checked out my new vid.

Didn't capture my attention. It just came out like a power point slide show presentation. You didn't take really advantage of the medium you're using, and I think that's why I got bored. It's a video, so I expected moving pictures. Hope that helps.
 
Very good job Abrianna.

I can't recall seeing the first one you posted and according to the comments it seems that you did some further work.
Excellent vid. Here's why:

Message is clear and interestingly conveyed.
Excellent editing of video and audio including scene splicing.
10/10.

Keep up the good work.
 
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