Can you write a Haiku?? try a hand here!!:)
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out of the depths of
hell come many faces that
are oblivious
oh I'm not sure if
the smilies I put at the
end should count at all :24:
What can I say to
the fact that I can write good
Haikus for you all
I took creative
writing in High School and they
taught me very well
hell come many faces that
are oblivious
oh I'm not sure if
the smilies I put at the
end should count at all :24:
What can I say to
the fact that I can write good
Haikus for you all
I took creative
writing in High School and they
taught me very well
out of the depths of
hell come many faces that
are oblivious
oh I'm not sure if
the smilies I put at the
end should count at all :24:
What can I say to
the fact that I can write good
Haikus for you all
I took creative
writing in High School and they
taught me very well
Wow! You made a great headstart!! Keep it up!
lol nice one from you too...frankly your sense of syllables is great!!
plz ignore minor errors as this is not a professional competition!!
I know it's not a competition. But you have discovered my anal side when it comes to writing.... anything! :cool
A novel alive
Fills my head with thoughts and words
Faster than the pen
Red I'm pretty sure that Haikus can blend if you want them to. As long as all the syllables are correct.In a Haiku, are you supposed to carry the first line into the second and so on? Like breaking up a sentence?
I don't think so.
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I've searched for some examples and I can see that you are correct. I prefer to avoid doing that though. Makes it more challenging.
Husband calls my name
Soft touch, brief kiss, subtle not
Pleasure is his prize
lol did I fiddle with your 'anal side', really? how bad of me!!
I see desire
To get a rise from below
No man's land that spot
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