Can you write a Haiku?? try a hand here!!:)

[mazHur]

Haiku is a form of poetry (Japanese origin)
in which short feelings or thoughts or anything for that matter is put down in three lines, each line in a sequence having 5-7-5 syllables respectively .

Here is the first one by me.....try a hand on Haiku and keep adding!!

Love is an ordeal
tougher than Hercules faced
easier for Romeo.

 

[itsmeJonB]

haikus can be fun
but some dont make any sense
refrigerator

 

[mazHur]

haikus can be fun
but some dont make any sense
refrigerator

hahahaha!! seems rather like a nonsense poem!!

 

[Zorak]

haikus can be fun
but some dont make any sense
refrigerator

i was going to use that one

 

[dkwrtw]

I love Haiku's, lol here's an MMA one I wrote

Right Leg Hospital
And Left Leg Cemetary
Catch Phrase gone Awry

 

[itsmeJonB]

i was going to use that one

lol i have no idea what it's from

 

[mazHur]

the sunshine of
my heart warms up cold figure
of a sexy blond.

 

[mazHur]

Balls are always round
they roll, they bounce, they are kicked
condemned just like Life!

 

[dkwrtw]

I haven't got time
For this Mickey Mouse Bullshit
FO/KY

 

[RedRyder]

Love is an or de al (6)
tough er than Herc u les faced (7)
eas ier for Ro meo. (7)

Understand the way haiku is made. Haiku in Japanese is written in a single vertical line with seventeen sound units or mora (not strictly the same as syllables) in a rhythm of five, seven, and five. In English (a stressed language), the ideas can be expressed with a short line, a long line, and another short stack.

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** http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Haiku-Poem


Not to be a pain
Say each word to hear it right
Use your fingers too

 

[mazHur]

The match was a draw
Jack and Jill worked hard to make
their goals even out!

 

[mazHur]

Love is an or de al (6)
tough er than Herc u les faced (7)
eas ier for Ro meo. (7)

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** http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Haiku-Poem


Not to be a pain
Say each word to hear it right
Use your fingers too

you are right but the syllablisation depends on how you read the word...where you put the stress.


With a little wine working on your mind you can also read it thus....
Love is an or del (5)
tough er than Herc u les faced (7)
eas ier for Ro mo. (5)

 

[dkwrtw]

Another MMA Haiku lol

Tito's Giant Head
Tito's Giant Head, Good Lord!
Tito's Giant Head

 

[KimmyCharmeleon]

An epic fail.
I bought a hamper for mum.
Won't fit in the bag

 

[dkwrtw]

Double Leg Takedown
Greatest move in history
Coleman's P4P

 

[RedRyder]

you are right but the syllablisation depends on how you read the word...where you put the stress.


With a little wine working on your mind you can also read it thus....
Love is an or del (5)
tough er than Herc u les faced (7)
eas ier for Ro mo. (5)

LOL! Ummm.... yes..... I do talk a tad differently when drinking wine too. However, I'm sure I'd not attempt a Haiku.

Tummy grumbling hard
Cookie odors fill the room
Satisfaction soon

 

[mazHur]

Romeo kissed her
lips and sucked the po-i-son
off Juliet's soul

 

[mazHur]

LOL! Ummm.... yes..... I do talk a tad differently when drinking wine too. However, I'm sure I'd not attempt a Haiku.

Tummy grumbling hard
Cookie odors fill the room
Satisfaction soon

lol nice one from you too...frankly your sense of syllables is great!!
plz ignore minor errors as this is not a professional competition!!

 

[dkwrtw]

I'm sick of this shit
All day every day non stop
Gospel Channel Blares

 

[itsmeJonB]

As Cartman would say
"Screw you Kyle, you dirty Jew"
Presents! It's Christmas