Can you Please correct my letter Thank you

[Tobi]

Hello my name is Tobias. Iam an german student.
I will make my Intership in Glasgow.
Please correct my follow letter for the Company

Thank you very match
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Thank you for your response.

I am currently at the University until to the beginning of April next year.

I can’t speak to you on 24th, because I am at the University.


I was in the department Compact in XXXX last company period.

I have independently planned, programmed and installed a solution for a water power plant.

In addition, I assisted several start-upon site.


I want to be active in this internship in the field of electrical engineering and getting work experiencein the following fields, if it is possible
hardware and software engineering
project management
after sales service


I want to make the internship in Glasgow from 13 April 2015 to 17 July 2015.


Best regards

 

[AUFred]

Hello my name is Tobias. I am a German student.
I will make my Internship in Glasgow.
Please correct my follow letter for the Company
Thank you very match
______________________________________________________________
TITLE HERE(Gentlemen or To Whom It MAY CONCERN,)

Thank you for your response.
I am currently at the University until the beginning of April next year.
I cannot speak to you on 24th, because I am at the University.
I was in the department Compact in XXXX last company period.
I have independently planned, programmed and installed a solution for a water power plant.
In addition, I assisted several start-upon site.
I want to be active in this internship in the field of electrical engineering and getting work experience in the following fields, if it is possible
hardware and software engineering
project management
after sales service
I want to make the internship in Glasgow from 13 April 2015 to 17 July 2015.
Best regards,