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Just something I wrote today instead of listening to some guy's presentation at a very boring meeting where I was supposed to be learning something. Or something. I wasn't paying attention.

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Copyright Matthew Trope

I called you in the morning;
you said so little.
You're so noncommittal 'bout the things you've done, the things you do.
When you say goodbye,
without commission...
Well, I'm not defensive, I'm just saying this 'cause
I LOVE YOU.
You know I hate it when
you have to be so cruel.
(Oh, fucking please:
send those faggots back to boarding school!)
"Concession? What's concession?
I've been sly and patronized."
Is that what it's about?
Oh, baby, honey:
SHUT YOUR MOUTH.


This is what I do when I argue with him. :tongue:
 
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well, like u said in my post, poetry is more about flow than proper grammar.
nice job on the poem trope by the way.

Hahah, I know it's about flow. This actually has a tune.

I'm just saying that because "Trope" is my husband, and the paraphrasing he's done is something I said. :tongue:
 
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