I am writing a short story, and I am going to try and get it published in a magazine soon. It's a little graphic, and isn't for people who read really happy books where everything goes right and the happy couple gets married and lives happily ever after. It's for people who recognize the serious situation the world is in and the barbaric nature of Statism. If you can't handle blood or something like that, DON'T READ. The theme is mostly about how true power can only come from holding to yourself and staying independent, whereas physical power only comes from another's submission.
However, I do want to sell it before I put it up on the internet for all to read. But I trust most of the people here, and I need some criticism. So, the first five people who express interest in reviewing the story shall receive a copy via Private Message as soon as I've finished this draft (might be a few days, I don't have much computer access).
So, hit that reply button if you're interested!
PS: It's romanticist, and the ending is happy, so don't be discouraged by the fact that the opening paragraph doesn't make it sound like it ends well.
However, I do want to sell it before I put it up on the internet for all to read. But I trust most of the people here, and I need some criticism. So, the first five people who express interest in reviewing the story shall receive a copy via Private Message as soon as I've finished this draft (might be a few days, I don't have much computer access).
So, hit that reply button if you're interested!
PS: It's romanticist, and the ending is happy, so don't be discouraged by the fact that the opening paragraph doesn't make it sound like it ends well.
Because oddly enough the normal kind of cunt I do enjoy being
