advertising fashion shoot

[pinkporridge]

this is an image i took for college.. i in no way endorse this product... infact i think its pretty shit

Comments please!

 

[Natasha]

Nice pic. Whoa, those are some dilated pupils!!!

 

[jassilem]

Very nice!

 

[Alien Allen]

nice pic but if it is an advertisement the product needs to be bigger doesn't it??

 

[pinkporridge]

nice pic but if it is an advertisement the product needs to be bigger doesn't it??

ot depends really.. if u look in a lot of magazines like elle and stuff that are just ful of ads and have no context.. then ul see a few of them are just an image in the back ground of some beautiful giel..and the product.. small in the corner

 

[pinkporridge]

ok so her shoulder was buggin me and like alien alan said. the bottle needs ot be bigger.. this is how it looks now... anything else need doing?..

Plz tell me.. it helps me learn

 

[jassilem]

I like the second one, better.

 

[pinkporridge]

thank you

 

[jassilem]

The detail of the close up is awesome!

I am in awe.. you are on the road to be great

 

[pinkporridge]

thank you muchly.. anythign i can change?

 

[jassilem]

thank you muchly.. anythign i can change?

It's looks great to me but I am sure you will have other comments from the peanut gallery... AKA Alien Allen

 

[pinkporridge]

lol! im awaitng sky blues approval

 

[jassilem]

Hey Ian get your ass on here and look at her pic!

 

[pinkporridge]

exactly!! where the hell is he when u need him?!

 

[Alien Allen]

It's looks great to me but I am sure you will have other comments from the peanut gallery... AKA Alien Allen

you ask and I shall comply

It looks better but to my eye there is something just not quite right.

Not that it is bad. It is very nice but I am picky and it seems like something needs to be changed a bit.

Although I must admit I am more into the full body nude shots so these close ups are hard to gauge.

 

[jassilem]

exactly!! where the hell is he when u need him?!

I know.

 

[pinkporridge]

what is not quite right.. i have been looking at this thing for ages.. it hard to see when u have been staring at somehtign for so long

 

[jassilem]

you ask and I shall comply

Boy are you prompt today.:nod:

 

[Natasha]

Okay, here's my opinion on what's not quite right on it. You all can feel free to blast me or whatever...but I honestly think that the chipped tooth on the model throws off the beauty of the photo. It's nice, crisp, and clean...but the chipped tooth kinda throws it off. So maybe if her lips were a little more closed??? I don't know, that's just the one thing I saw...I still say it's a beautiful picture. Good job!!!

 

[Panic]

Nice pic. Whoa, those are some dilated pupils!!!

Hahahahaha! That's girl's tripping her face off.