Alex Kenenshi: Ninja Warrior

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Episode 2: Unleashing Fox power Pt.1


Alex is lying in his bed, thinking. “I don’t get it,” Alex started, thinking. “Ever since I went to Subring I have this fox parts.” Someone knocks on the door. “Who is it?” Alex asked, popping off his bed. “It’s Jennifer and Ashley.” Jennifer said. Alex gets off the bed and opens the door. Jennifer and Ashley are standing there with their matching plaid outfits on and with food in their hands. “We thought you might be hungry!” Ashley said. Ashley and Jennifer walk in Alex’s room and Alex closes the door. “Well, I am kind of hungry.” Alex said, rubbing his stomach. Jennifer hands him the bag and he grabs it. Alex reaches into the bag and pulls out a burger and some fries. “Hey these are those kinds of meals you bought for me in the 1st grade!” Alex said to Jennifer, surpised. “Well, I really bought them because they have a lot to do with what I’m about to say.” Jennifer said. “What is it?” Alex asked with his mouth full. “Well, Alex the truth is I… I… I love you!” Jennifer yelled. Alex stopped eating in shock. Ashley started crying and hugged Jennifer. “This is sooooooo romantic…in a 6th grade kind of way.” Ashley said holding on to Jennifer. “Well, Ashley I… I love you too!” Alex said holding his chest. “I never felt this feel this feeling before is it love?” Alex thought. Jennifer walks over to Alex and kisses him. Alex cress her hair and Jennifer sighs.
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Alex Kanashi said:
Episode 2: Unleashing Fox power Pt.1


Alex is lying in his bed, thinking. “I don’t get it,” Alex started, thinking. “Ever since I went to Subring I have this fox parts.” Someone knocks on the door. “Who is it?” Alex asked, popping off his bed. “It’s Jennifer and Ashley.” Jennifer said. Alex gets off the bed and opens the door. Jennifer and Ashley are standing there with their matching plaid outfits on and with food in their hands. “We thought you might be hungry!” Ashley said. Ashley and Jennifer walk in Alex’s room and Alex closes the door. “Well, I am kind of hungry.” Alex said, rubbing his stomach. Jennifer hands him the bag and he grabs it. Alex reaches into the bag and pulls out a burger and some fries. “Hey these are those kinds of meals you bought for me in the 1st grade!” Alex said to Jennifer, surpised. “Well, I really bought them because they have a lot to do with what I’m about to say.” Jennifer said. “What is it?” Alex asked with his mouth full. “Well, Alex the truth is I… I… I love you!” Jennifer yelled. Alex stopped eating in shock. Ashley started crying and hugged Jennifer. “This is sooooooo romantic…in a 6th grade kind of way.” Ashley said holding on to Jennifer. “Well, Ashley I… I love you too!” Alex said holding his chest. “I never felt this feel this feeling before is it love?” Alex thought. Jennifer walks over to Alex and kisses him. Alex cress her hair and Jennifer sighs.
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Wow
You taked it form a action story to a love story pretty cool
 
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Episode 2, just one question, how old are these characters.

Overall, good episode, like Johnny said good transition to love story.
 
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The characters in this story are:

Alex Kenenshi Jennifer Moon Tenchi Amy (evil)



Episode 3: Unleashing Fox power Pt.2

Alex and Jennifer are walking to school holding hands. Tenchi walks up to them and starts breathing hard. “Tenchi…, what’s up?” Alex asked, confused. “There’s a battle going on in Subring.” Tenchi said, breathing hard. “Sorry Jennifer, I gotta go.” Alex said, sighing. “Do you have to? Jennifer asked. “I made a promise to the protectors of Subring that I would die to save this world.” Alex said. “Well, if you really have to I guess I can manage.” Jennifer said, disappointed. “Let’s go!” Tenchi said. Alex raised his arm with a watch it. “I call upon the world of Subring!” Alex yelled. A huge portal shot out of his watch and opened. “You ready to go?” Alex asked Tenchi. “Yep!” Tenchi said and they walked through the portal.
 
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