alone again

[random guy 517]

the chaos
the pain
the empty souls
searching for meaning
i become one
cast out again...
i leave them behind
i am alone again

You
the one whom i love
faded to nothing
remnants...mere memories
i leave you behind
i am alone again

my hopes
my dreams
my life
dashed away
Lord's watchful eye turns
forsaken by them
forsaken by Him
forsaken by you

i leave myself behind
i am alone again

 

[elluko]

Bravo, bravo!

 

[Charmer]

I like it...

 

[random guy 517]

personally i dont think its my best, but thanks for the feedback.

 

[Under-Ground]

personally i dont think its my best, but thanks for the feedback.

correct, I have read better but its not to bad
Keep up the good work

By saying correct its not the best I mean this one is better http://www.offtopicz.net/10053-im-noob.html