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A dream spread colors on my life
Aquamarine shade sketching throughout
Smiling shining face glare at me
Flickering lights in debris

As the dream was over
The reality hovered above
What I experienced was a déjà vu
A perfect lady, I love

Now I was too overwhelmed
That I bought some flowers
And hand it over to you
I valued you and now I need you

As the trance was over
The reality covered above
What I experienced was a déjà vu
A perfect lady, I love

Your dancing feet will remain pretty
I will make sure that you sleep before I do
I will make sure that you be happy
I know that you are happy


[ P.S. - Silent need ur thghts guess not made it too well ... ( All others ur remarks are also most welcome) ]
 
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A dream spread colors on my life
Aquamarine shade sketching throughout
Smiling shining face glare at me
Flickering lights in debris

As the dream was over
The reality hovered above
What I experienced was a déjà vu
A perfect lady, I love

Now I was too overwhelmed
That I bought some flowers
And hand it over to you
I valued you and now I need you

As the trance was over
The reality covered above
What I experienced was a déjà vu
A perfect lady, I love

Your dancing feet will remain pretty
I will make sure that you sleep before I do
I will make sure that you be happy
I know that you are happy

[ P.S. - Silent need ur thghts guess not made it too well ... ( All others ur remarks are also most welcome) ]

Sam,

That is very beautiful, feeling and emotion speak well in your words.
 

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Thanks Silent. .... it will not be wrong if I say credit goes to you because I love writting and just seeing your contribution to this section has helped me jotting down something like this.
Your response is appreciated thanks a ton
 

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Thank you, but the talent is yours and has always been there I am sure.

But I am glad that I could encourage you to express it more.
 

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Thanks El and Lemon ... i am obliged ... ... thanks for going thru it ... Lemon it will be nice to see somethin good from ur side too ... EL has already proved by " SHANNONS CANNON "
 
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