The Roses Are Dead

[Dana]

Roses are dead the violets are too
I'm drowning in your hatred
I'm coming unglued
Where did I go wrong?
What the fuck should i do
...My words seem stale
But my mind can't shake you...

 

[itsmeJonB]

i like it

 

[HottyToddyChick]

i like it, but the rhythm on the last line seems funny to me...

 

[itsmeJonB]

i like it, but the rhythm on the last line seems funny to me...

read it like this

"but-my-mind cant shake you"

 

[edgray]

I like it too.

 

[HottyToddyChick]

read it like this

"but-my-mind cant shake you"

Aaaaaaah!

I like!

 

[crackers90]

:thumbup like it

 

[KimmyCharmeleon]

Cool stuff..