Thornless Rose Poetry

[Thornless]

Together In Death​

(* Dedication to my ‘Nana’ Lyla and ‘Grandpa’ Earl Scott)​

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Although that we are now​

Forever apart,​

I know that you are​

Still here in heart.​

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How could I forget​

Those happy days,​

When I was so small,​

While you smiled watching me play.​

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I can not say​

That I will not shed a tear,​

Because I am not used​

To you not being near.​

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But I can only wait​

For the day I have no breath,​

For that is the day,​

That we are together in death.​

 

[MoonOwl]

Nicely put Thornless...

 

[Thornless]

Crying​

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Crying, I’m crying.​

Tears steaming down my face,​

At such a tiresome pace.​

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Falling, I’m falling.​

Tumbling, tumbling into a bottomless pit.​

One so deep it can only my guilt, and in it I sit.​

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Waiting, I’m waiting.​

My eyes and ears are closed, although I can feel it come.​

I am sightless, but I can see where it is headed from.​

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Crying, I’m crying again.​

I am falling from grace, waiting for the warmth of a friend.​

Even though my eyes are closed, I cannot endure to see the end.​

 

[NuckingFuts]

Wow that was really good.

 

[Thornless]

Be​

(* For Bryan)​

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Is there such a place as forever?​

Such a word as ‘lasting’?​

Such a thing called ‘love’?​

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Or is this emotion lust?​

Desire, betrayal, yearning?​

Is this the meaning of marriage?​

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“I do. . . I don’t.”​

“I love you. . . I hate you.”​

Are these those meaningful, little words?​

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Be mine. . .​

Upon my knees I ask you;​

Within my dreams I hear your voice.​

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Be true. . .​

My heart beats intensity for you,​

Awaiting to be heard.​

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Be one. . .​

My love, my soul, my friend,​

light my fire and keep it bright.​

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Be you. . .​

Untouchable, unreachable.​

Love, I yearn to cross this distance.​

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Be well. . .​

I pine to be safe in your embrace.​

Most of all, please be real.​

 

[MrKnight]

nice work thornless, crying is a real good one, prefer short poetry (eventhough mine isnt hehe(short attention span lol)). good uses of words, liking it! Kudos!!

 

[cam elle toe]

Lovely....I like crying too.


I used to write LOTS of poetry when I was younger...my daughter writes HEAPS...but its quite dark and depressing

 

[MrKnight]

Lovely....I like crying too.


I used to write LOTS of poetry when I was younger...my daughter writes HEAPS...but its quite dark and depressing

i like the moods and imagery used in dark poems, goes with my personality

 

[ssl]

Crying​

Crying, I’m crying.​

Tears steaming down my face,​

At such a tiresome pace.​

Falling, I’m falling.​

Tumbling, tumbling into a bottomless pit.​

One so deep it can only my guilt, and in it I sit.​

Waiting, I’m waiting.​

My eyes and ears are closed, although I can feel it come.​

I am sightless, but I can see where it is headed from.​

Crying, I’m crying again.​

I am falling from grace, waiting for the warmth of a friend.​

Even though my eyes are closed, I cannot endure to see the end.​

not to be too critical of the poem, but the "One so deep it can only my guilt, and in it I sit' line does not flow, only because of the stumbling on the '...it can only my guilt, ...' slowed me down.

I am not sure if you did not type the word, but something seems missing. :surrender