Your Eyes

[Sam]

Your Eyes ........ Yes Your Eyes ......

Are so beautiful , having lust .. Yes your Eyes...

I have fallen in Love ... Hold me again .. Place me in somewhere in your Eyessss.....

My heart is saying all time, That I am your destiny .....

My Lips force me to talk only about your name

Your talk is so sweet that whenever I remember .... Feels like a fragrance of a beautiful flower....

I will hide you somewhere ... will protect your shadow .. I will live with you forever...

I will live with you forever ....

Your Silky Hair ... I see them and think that I should live my life in their shelter forever...

My Heart keeps on saying that she has diclosed her secret to me ... God loves only

them .. whose Heart has fallen in Love .... in Love .. in Love...

I love you ...



( This is not a poem but a true feeling of Love, guys your views please. Thank You)

 

[random guy 517]

thats what i call heartfelt. great job.

 

[trope]

Certainly sounds poetic to me.

Great job.

 

[SilentEyz]

It took me some time to reply to this one Sam,

Reading it a few times, thinking about it,

I find the style of it, very unique to your normal writing, This one I feel has so much more of you then many of the others I have read.

So many powerful thoughts and emotions, yet a sense of holding back all play in those words.

Its very good, and Thank you as always for sharing it with us.

 

[Sam]

Silent believe me I was at first a bit surprised for not getting ur response ... I agree with u its a bit different from my other writting , may be because I love my wife tooooooooooo much and just cant live without her

 

[SilentEyz]

Well you have a beautiful way of showing it, Those words are very strong.