You ( READ THIS TIME PLZ)

[darklove]

The time is ticking quickly
my heart is fading slowly
if i dont see the one i love soon
all that will be left are the fragments of my soul
the one that i love
the love that is true
the one that i miss
have you guessed
ITS YOU


Brittany



OK not to great but how is it?​

 

[Kat]

I like it...its to the point...very good

 

[Darkstar]

Very nice, i like it.

 

[Fearless]

It's just OK. Good effort though.