Why.... ( maybe its getting better comment?)

[darklove]

Why do i bother
my life is a mess
my self exsitents is becoming less
i have no body
no one to turn to
only myself and thats also becoming less and less
how do i trust other people
when i dont trust myself
why do you hurt me
making me hurt myself
Putting me down
turning me down
no longer accepting me
i go home and cry
and wait for that moment and scream i want to die
i mean truly and really why do i bother why do i try
when all ill ever be to you is one person that only cries
but thats when i turn around and say
look what you have done to me
im sitting here wanting to die
just because you are cruel and lie
so trust me when i say this it is no lie
that next time i say it
i truly will die.


By Brit


Intresting in my opnion im kinda werided out that i wrote it but i guess is ok wht yalls think?
not true bout me tho all tho i dont feel accepted ​

 

[SilentEyz]

Its very good, lot of good emotion Dark.

 

[Bagel]

very nice brit keep it up

 

[Kat]

very good poem brit... very strong emotions

 

[Sam]

agree with Kat and Silent, emotions and emotions .. very true.

 

[darklove]

thanks everyone yah i went back and read some of my better poems and it kinda of helped me most of these are a mix of how im feeling and things i wuold never dooo ehhh i dont know tho... anyways im glad you all like themm!!! just expressing my feelings..


Brit

 

[Charmer]

I like it...