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Hello what you mean for my grammer?
Can you correct my mistakes.
Thank you very much

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Hi Mr. XXXX,

Yes I will spending some time working at the company in XXXX after the internship.

I am at the university until the beginning of April. After that, I going to take vacation until 11 april. Subsequently, I going to make the internship, than I going to work at the company in XXXX by the end of September. I will take the rest of vacation in the period of XXXXX.

If you have any questions just write me.

I would appreciate it, if you could send me a confirmation of the internship .

Best regards
 
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Hi Mr. XXXX,

Yes I will be spending some time working at your company in XXXX after my internship.

I am at the university until the beginning of April. After that, I'm going to take a vacation until April 11. Subsequently, I'm going to take the internship, then I'm going to work at the company in XXXX by the end of September. I will take the rest of vacation in the period of XXXXX.

If you have any questions, feel free to contact me.

I would appreciate it if you could send me a confirmation of the internship .

Best regards

By the way, I don't think you're in the right section and adding more information to this piece of text would be helpful. Like "I going to make the internship" I don't understand what you meant here, but changing the work "make" to "take" made some sense, so I went with that. Cheers! :)
 
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