vent

[Bagel]

it builds
triggered by emotion
fueled by stupidity
drowned in self-loathing

silent

tearing at my mind
devouring my heart
leavign me hollow
and hurt

uncertain

wanting to cry out
wanting to hold you
protect you
save you

fool

not needed
not wanted
used up
to late now

worthless

nothign you can do
nothign you can say
building up
misconceptions

nothing

 

[Kat]

wow bagel...i dont know what excatally i want to say here but i wish i could give you a great big hug for this. very moving very sad...it makes me want to cry. *hugs*

 

[AUDRAA]

wow Bagel I like, thats alot of emotion all wrapped up in those words

 

[SilentEyz]

Very well done Bagle, Powerful

 

[Bagel]

thanks .glad to know somebody is listening,and that i can do something right