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[Veronica]

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by: Gabby Irvin

Here I sit,
Alone in the cold dark room.
Wishing someone would come.
I scearm and cry,
Still nobody hears or comes.
I finally die,
After the cold, dark world took my life.



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This is my nieces Poem.. EVERY ONE.. If u think its good... click the link below and vote!!! She is only 12 years old and very good at this.. She has already won several of these competitions.


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[Dana]

Not bad I like It I gave it a 10. Reminds me of my old work.

 

[teh_fuzz]

done!
very nice work from your niece!

 

[SYN]

short and strong... nice

 

[Mase]

Sounds nice.

 

[COOL_BREEZE2]

Voted. 10/10.

Very good.

 

[Mrs Behavin]

Very good for her age! I hope she knows how talented she is!

 

[skyblue]

i voted 10/10.......it actually is good

 

[dazner]

Very good for her age as i've heard someone already said but this isn't how she feels hopefully...

most poetry this good comes from true emotion...

but either way very good I gave her a 10...

 

[Veronica]

SHe is very emo.. Unfortunately, she has gone through some bad things.. she has already been a cutter, but has gotten help.. We dont know why she is this way, she has never had anything bad happen to her other than school mates teasing her.

 

[dazner]

poetry does help to release a bit and it sounds like she's great at it.....


maybe she just needs to keep writing....


wish her goodluck for me will ya V.....

she's got a bright future with such a hidden talent...