True love ( this isnt my best)

[darklove]

True love can be nothing more
nothing more then a feeling
thats whats people say
but i say its more then just a normal feeling
its wonderus tremendous feeling that no one can fake
that no one can take
not from you
not from me
not from a mother and her baby
not from a father and his son
you cant take true love away from me
that wouldnt be fair
but maybe
if you people would grow to see
that true love
is between me and some one else
so i dont think it would be fair
to let a parent say weather or not
true love is for you
because i cant fake nither can you
so why should they be able to take it
they cant thats true
and thats why i wrote this just about you

to some one i love alot

Bre

 

[SilentEyz]

Thank you for sharing

 

[elluko]

Two thumbs waaaaaay up!

 

[darklove]

Ahhhh You Peoples Need To Chat More And Need To Comment More Of My Poems Lol!

 

[darklove]

AHHHH YOU PEOPLES NEED TO CHAT MORE AND NEED TO COMMENT MORE OF MY POEMS LOL! all tho that has nothing to do with my peom hehe im weird yet cool like that

 

[elluko]

What does it say in your avatar?

 

[Kat]

awsome poem dark... I love it

 

[darklove]

Thanks people and my avatar says got an iron lol But anyways thanks i just write what i feel!

Bre