Time( ok i think this one is better read plz)

[darklove]

Time is ticking quickly
My heart is fading slowly
if i dont see the one i love soon
all that will be left of me
are the fragments of my soul​

If times ticking so quickly
and my heart is fading
then why do i feel this comfert when im around you
when you hold me im warm
and when your gone i feel so cold
so if my life is gonna waste away
i would defentally be willing
to waste it away with you ​

Brit​

im hoping this one is better!​

 

[Bagel]

..once again..proofreading is your freidn..butother than that its nice..i can relate ..your gettign better ..keep it up

 

[darklove]

..once again..proofreading is your freidn..butother than that its nice..i can relate ..your gettign better ..keep it up

Its not that im bad many people say im Amazing at it its just that im never in the right mood for it now most of my poems come so good when im depressed and im getting back into that stage so i should be writing good again

 

[Bagel]

haha i know what ya mean..all my best poetry happens when im really depressed..or just in an emotional mood

 

[Kat]

it sounds good to me dark