the health lottery - what do you think of it ?

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THE HEALTH LOTTERY - IS IT DOOMED OR IS IT GOING TO EXPLODE ?

first and for-most,
theJoe has to give mega praise,
and i prey to god,
this great cause dose never erase.
we are all getting a chance,
to be £100,000 richer,
everyone would love that,
but that's not the full picture.
in the process,
it is mostly the poor helping the poor,
Robin Hood as had a hit on the head,
he dose no the rich wont score.
freedom of choice,
makes this so respectable,
now the negative,
every shop i go in, is reject-able.
they all come out with waffle,
ooooooooohhhhh the machine has a error,
the N-H-S and the managers of health lottery need to give formal warnings,
to install a bit of terror.
the next fault is simple,
it is a blatant crime,
you wound not think we are in 2011,
because the machine is slower then time.
2 bits of advice,
to the N-H-S and the health management board,
make all your shops sell,
and if it gets quicker to do,money is your reward.

( I SENT MY POEM TO THEM AND I HOPE IT FIX'S THE 2 PROPLEMS I HAVE TRYED TO HIGHLIGHT. HAS ANYONE ELSE HAD THIS PROBLEM ?)

 

[porterjack]

I like that poem

 

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