The Drowning Life

[Sa\/en]

The Drowning Life​

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Your pain screams out, never to be answered​

Your hate clings to you for it has no other victim​

Your love radiates yet no one sends it back.​

Your life spins like water running down a drain​

As you try and grab it, it slips through your fingers​

You are only left with the dirty sediment​

The sediment being your hate, fears, pain​

It’s the only thing you’re left with.​

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[SilentEyz]

SaVen

Very powerful meaning in such few words. few words with so much truth.

 

[elluko]

*clap clap clap clap clap clap*
Bravo! Encore!

 

[Sa\/en]

Thanks guyz. I know the poem seems a bit negative, but I wrote it when I was feeling a little bit down. Today, my poetry could have very different emotion built into it.

 

[SilentEyz]

Well please feel free to share some of your diffrent stuff..

As for the negative, somtimes that is what creates the beauty of poetry, and I am very good at writing the negative,, so no need to apolagize.

It is good to see our own emotions in other peoples words. and It is a gift to be able to put them there or others to see.