Sick of it All

[Boomer]

tired of being on the bottom
fighting for the winning breath
dwelling in what is mine to vent
cast aside the rest

blessed be the ones of ignorance
life's turmoil but a spell
while I revel in discord
my personal hell

Ode to me this weight I bare
pushes me to the earth
if I am all but ashes and dust
How oh lord do I quench my spirits thirst

Seeing beauty, as I the problem
walk by distained and disgusted
never giving in to my needs
never allow myself to be trusted

As much as I would like to let go
would like to learn and like to know
I never will, due to my path
So here I sit, alone in my aftermath.

 

[Johnny]

That Was Very Good Bommer

 

[Boomer]

Thank you sir.

 

[Kat]

very moving boomer hun. I love your writing style so very much....it always seems to hit hard with me.

 

[Boomer]

Thank you Kat. I'm happy to give a piece of me to you guys. Maybe you cats can break down the meaning behind them. I put in my poetry, things I've told no one. I purposefully keep my emmotions bottled up. I let them build and build. I tell no one. Most of this stuff is right off the top of my head.

 

[Anniston]

Boomer, you have a gift with the written word. I bet you find it very nourishing to the soul to write.

 

[Boomer]

It gives me an adrenaline rush. Especially when I freestyle. Whatch out cause Im shakin head to toe! Thanks for the kind words Anniston. : )

 

[inferno_grl]

nice.... i can't write anything like that... i like it....

 

[Alex Kanashi]

Bommer nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:tongue:

 

[Maritxu]

Really nice boomer... wow

 

[SilentEyz]

Boomer.. Excellant as always

 

[MaterialGirl25]

Are u sure you got emotions? cuz its seems like your very very cold hearted.. are you just putting on an act? I bet you are!

 

[Boomer]

Do you mind creating your own thread that describes why your opinion matters? Thank you.

 

[Darkstar]

Are u sure you got emotions? cuz its seems like your very very cold hearted.. are you just putting on an act? I bet you are!

I bet you write poems about puppies and sunshine, dont you?

 

[Kat]

besides it takes a warm hearted man to love his teddy as much as boomer does

 

[SilentEyz]

And for anyone Who Failed to Read the Intro to the Lit Room.. You can start here

http://www.offtopicz.net/9036-all-who-enter-please-read.html

Material Girl.. just allow me to say, If you feel the need to debate or argue with Boomer you NEED to take it to PM's..,

It will not be done here.. If you like his poetry Compliment it, If you do not, then dont even bother reading it.. but this is not the place to try and create an issue with another member.. I have made that clear.

And The Subject is OVER.. ( for everyone)

Boomer, your Work is amazing, and It shows a side of you that is as beautiful as you are funny and entertaining.

Keep posting them because I know I among others want to keep reading them.

 

[Boomer]

*shakes his head*