Seeing

[Johnny]

Seeing is knowing
Seeing is wondering
Seeing is believeing
Seeing is controling
Seeing is seeing

 

[Johnny]

This is just number 2
I`ll start writing longer Literature

 

[SilentEyz]

Its good Johnny..

Everyone starts somewhere, and I think you are doing good.. on the right road.. keep it up. and keep them posted.

 

[SilentSinz]

But to beable to see with our eyes close, now thats truley an opening of the eyes

Johhny your writing is intreguing, maybe because it helps others think or pops ideas into others heads, im not sure. But I agree with the other silent on this one, your doing good, and when you finally hit the mark im sure it will be that much more amazing. Keep diggin, keep writing, cant read the long litature, you have planned for us all

 

[Johnny]

Thanks
Silent1
&
Silent2

 

[random guy 517]

But to beable to see with our eyes close, now thats truley an opening of the eyes

whoa...ill have to chew on that for a while...


but johnny, great poem...sometimes the simplest things are the best things...poetry doesnt need to be long to be powerful, its in the word choice and style...and you have a good handle on that...

cant wait to hear more from you

 

[Johnny]

Thanks Dude