Reflection ( plz read plz)

[darklove]

whos that girl standing there looking so pathetic
whos that girl standing there crying away her day
that must be me because im looking in the mirror and ill i see is this girl
crying and screaming and just letting go and wont let any one no it ither


whos that girl standing there staring straight at me
face so wet dripping eyes
all she does is crys?
whos this girl it must be me cuz all i can see is me standing there slowly slowly dying and fading
whos that girl lying there on the floor motionless but eyes still driping
me me its me i scream as i watch my reflection fade



Brit

 

[elluko]

GJ, Brit.

 

[alleycat]

I would like to slit my wrists now... thank you.

 

[SilentEyz]

Dark, That is amazing feelings coming thru in those words. You should be very proud of your writing.

 

[darklove]

I would like to slit my wrists now... thank you.

Wow intresting why ....