Dodge_Sniper
Active Member
So, I've settled on a nice title, and redid my entire synopsis from scratch.
A girl grows up in a house with a doll very special to her. Eventually though, she starts to go crazy, believing the doll is talking to her. One fateful day, her house is burned down, and years later, they go through the remains, only to find the doll unscathed. Later, the doll isauctioned, and the new owners get freaked out. The doll drives them mad. The new child owner of the puppet starts to lose it, just like the original owner, and the parents begin searching for the original owner. In their search, they unlock deadly secrets behind the doll's past.
Much more of a developed plot outline than my first draft. And if this isn't good news enough, I recently spoke(Or rather messaged) with J. LaRose over Myspace(The man who plays Troy, the Body Chains victim in SAW III), and he said that he thinks this idea is very excellent, and he also gave me some great advice.
Any suggestions, comments, etc?
A girl grows up in a house with a doll very special to her. Eventually though, she starts to go crazy, believing the doll is talking to her. One fateful day, her house is burned down, and years later, they go through the remains, only to find the doll unscathed. Later, the doll isauctioned, and the new owners get freaked out. The doll drives them mad. The new child owner of the puppet starts to lose it, just like the original owner, and the parents begin searching for the original owner. In their search, they unlock deadly secrets behind the doll's past.
Much more of a developed plot outline than my first draft. And if this isn't good news enough, I recently spoke(Or rather messaged) with J. LaRose over Myspace(The man who plays Troy, the Body Chains victim in SAW III), and he said that he thinks this idea is very excellent, and he also gave me some great advice.
Any suggestions, comments, etc?