hope you enjoy this one on this site that use to exist oh about 5 years ago I had a "Poem Battle" back and forth with this one guy named MR. Dread...his beliefs were pro-war...He was pretty much an angry Hispanic male..angry at the fact of racism towards hispanic...as you can tell it was a hispanic chat site...but here were the poems enjoy...
dazner's...
yo all this talk of revolutionaries got me feeling so ill
how the fuck you can say your out for a good cause when your still out to kill
murderous talk enemies crouch the line to get bullets embeeded first
it's war afair underground taste of blood loss to which side took the beating worst
serial cats demonic in deminor come slow to get killed fast
most "Revo's" don't last....talk about freedom ya get blast
it's an ongoing stuggle but why spark shit in the first place
isn't our cause to be united to be the most accomplished race
hate fills our lungs the ever sence of worth is insanity
were never gonna be the ones left with a kill who mentality
come right take your religious cause and put meaning to words
this disease we released has killed more humans than the plaque with birds
we should face it this goverments criminal minds wasted
it's a ever-lost-struggle for survival finger prints on the gun who traced it?
not mine or yours but ours together on the trigger please don't pull
cause my bloods just as red as the next ready to kill fool...
Mr. Dread's..
greetings to all,
it takes a revolution to make a solution
so much fustration-so much confusion
i dont want to live in the park
cant trust no shadows after dark
so my friend i wish that you could see
like a bird in the tree
gods soldiers must be free
never let a politician grant you a favour
he will always want to control you forever
so if a fire-make it burn
and if its blood-then make it run
gods soldiers are on top
so you cant predict the flop
kill, cramp and paralyze-all weak at conception
wipe them heathens out from creation
let rightousness cover the earth
teach them youth-start from birth
dazner's...
nice...
gods every meaning is life so how can you call your self his soldier
not granted finer things i admit but why kill to try and take over
The "Man" isn't me or you..white or brown but ignorance at it's best
saying another life is worth dying for you to catch a break is simply grotesque
campare yourself to African natives that kill for diamonds and hay
cause killing for a way out of hell has just guarantee'd you a stay
Parks aren't so dark if you learn to make wine out of water
Don't consider yourself free? move the bug grow independence from slaughters
a machetti and a gun are for survival not for stardom thru warfare
cause what god did to free himself from the cross and your "war" don't compare
fighting for a meaning should be considered a fight already lost
cause to give my live is suicide in "Gods eyes" an unforgivable cost
why be what you consider "free" on earth for an eternity of damnation
if God exist truly then let him provide this earth with salvation...
Mr. Dread's...
your good !
from ancient times , god commanded his army
solomon, king david-so i continue the fight
there is a natural mystic blowing through the air
if you listen carefully now-you will hear
this could be the first trumpet
might as well be the last
many more will have to suffer-many more will have to die
dont ask me why.....
i try to live my life by the book of life
even though i know-some is a lie
i try my best to do my best-and still we cry
if i am wrong-let my god condem me
if i am right-let me bask in his glory of his light
so to all my foe's and freinds
you may live to see today
but we not know the end
dazner's...
The end is everclear present every day it shines bright
it's around every corner in every car at every street light
unevidable it's a part of gods plan but at his time not ours
to be created equal is a lie but we don't hold the powers
why attempt to convert my energy to a cause mayhem for a dream
it's just that and may not come true ever why be part of this team
Never be condemed though my tears pierce through bullets astray
cause my words mean more than a war each letter is life in another day
I'll forever ponder the these plots set by "our" leaders for a free race
to give my life for this cause is to say i'm done and tired of this place
but i live for that which needs me for that i could never be erased
my existance is more than just a one cause but to free the world
in my beliefs i'm forever straight in my cause i'll never be curled
Do we really get charged a fee for being Brown cause truth is i haven't paid
For one voice can make difference a forever echo never to fade..
dazner's...
yo all this talk of revolutionaries got me feeling so ill
how the fuck you can say your out for a good cause when your still out to kill
murderous talk enemies crouch the line to get bullets embeeded first
it's war afair underground taste of blood loss to which side took the beating worst
serial cats demonic in deminor come slow to get killed fast
most "Revo's" don't last....talk about freedom ya get blast
it's an ongoing stuggle but why spark shit in the first place
isn't our cause to be united to be the most accomplished race
hate fills our lungs the ever sence of worth is insanity
were never gonna be the ones left with a kill who mentality
come right take your religious cause and put meaning to words
this disease we released has killed more humans than the plaque with birds
we should face it this goverments criminal minds wasted
it's a ever-lost-struggle for survival finger prints on the gun who traced it?
not mine or yours but ours together on the trigger please don't pull
cause my bloods just as red as the next ready to kill fool...
Mr. Dread's..
greetings to all,
it takes a revolution to make a solution
so much fustration-so much confusion
i dont want to live in the park
cant trust no shadows after dark
so my friend i wish that you could see
like a bird in the tree
gods soldiers must be free
never let a politician grant you a favour
he will always want to control you forever
so if a fire-make it burn
and if its blood-then make it run
gods soldiers are on top
so you cant predict the flop
kill, cramp and paralyze-all weak at conception
wipe them heathens out from creation
let rightousness cover the earth
teach them youth-start from birth
dazner's...
nice...
gods every meaning is life so how can you call your self his soldier
not granted finer things i admit but why kill to try and take over
The "Man" isn't me or you..white or brown but ignorance at it's best
saying another life is worth dying for you to catch a break is simply grotesque
campare yourself to African natives that kill for diamonds and hay
cause killing for a way out of hell has just guarantee'd you a stay
Parks aren't so dark if you learn to make wine out of water
Don't consider yourself free? move the bug grow independence from slaughters
a machetti and a gun are for survival not for stardom thru warfare
cause what god did to free himself from the cross and your "war" don't compare
fighting for a meaning should be considered a fight already lost
cause to give my live is suicide in "Gods eyes" an unforgivable cost
why be what you consider "free" on earth for an eternity of damnation
if God exist truly then let him provide this earth with salvation...
Mr. Dread's...
your good !
from ancient times , god commanded his army
solomon, king david-so i continue the fight
there is a natural mystic blowing through the air
if you listen carefully now-you will hear
this could be the first trumpet
might as well be the last
many more will have to suffer-many more will have to die
dont ask me why.....
i try to live my life by the book of life
even though i know-some is a lie
i try my best to do my best-and still we cry
if i am wrong-let my god condem me
if i am right-let me bask in his glory of his light
so to all my foe's and freinds
you may live to see today
but we not know the end
dazner's...
The end is everclear present every day it shines bright
it's around every corner in every car at every street light
unevidable it's a part of gods plan but at his time not ours
to be created equal is a lie but we don't hold the powers
why attempt to convert my energy to a cause mayhem for a dream
it's just that and may not come true ever why be part of this team
Never be condemed though my tears pierce through bullets astray
cause my words mean more than a war each letter is life in another day
I'll forever ponder the these plots set by "our" leaders for a free race
to give my life for this cause is to say i'm done and tired of this place
but i live for that which needs me for that i could never be erased
my existance is more than just a one cause but to free the world
in my beliefs i'm forever straight in my cause i'll never be curled
Do we really get charged a fee for being Brown cause truth is i haven't paid
For one voice can make difference a forever echo never to fade..
