Poem I Wrote Yesterday

[KimmyCharmeleon]

Umm, I called it something lame for the meantime, so I won't state it on here lol.

Are these unexpected expectations,
For you to miss me in our separations?
My desires overriding my senses and mind
But you cannot take a hint, no, you're too blind.
Other fools falling and stumbling upon me.
I reject their requests, because maybe
There was a spark, a glimmer of hope
In us; but with indecision I cannot cope.
Should I demand myself to give in
To the forces disturbing my living?
Being ostracised in the sombre shadows
Because whatever heart you have is beating so shallow.
Every day, questioning all of this confusion
Whether to invert, or conform to tradition;
Release my feelings, this pressure I won't take.
But will I ever know, if you will reciprocate?

 

[Jessica]

I like it :nod:

 

[KimmyCharmeleon]

Thank you again

 

[DuhhhBlond]

I am in awe..

you are ten million times the poet I could ever wish to be, Kimmy

 

[KimmyCharmeleon]

Aaw thank you I try my best, and continually try to improve.

 

[DuhhhBlond]

are you one of those really savvy poet/writers with an mfa or studying to get one?

 

[KimmyCharmeleon]

Umm, what are they? Lol, I just like to write poems, I have a whole blog of them tat I have been updating since August 2007, the link is on my profile page if you wanna read. Some have swearing in them though lol.

 

[DuhhhBlond]

Master of Fine Arts

you're writing is educated, mine is raw and unrefined

 

[KimmyCharmeleon]

I think I just had a really good English teacher lol, we were always doing small things to build up vocabulary and synonyms for basic words etc.
I have better poems than this I think, this was just a quickie lol.